Posted by Dr. Drag on February 14, 2001 at 11:00:15:126.96.36.199
In Reply to: Spurned, Burned and Denied... posted by Chancaca on February 13, 2001 at 20:23:26:
: Death Queen: art thou mine?
: No! My flesh your fangs do rip!
: Screw it - I'm going home!
See now, you've made the mistake I did. Your last line is six syllables when it should be five.
How about: "Screw it - I've gone home!" or "Damn! - I'm going home" or even "Daddy's coming
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